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Post by Diosma on Jun 28, 2013 5:00:18 GMT
Alright guests. This is where you can tell us your opinion about the rp. If you have any tips, feel free. Questions? We'll answer those too. It's really easy to use it. Click on reply, type in a name and what you wanna say. Then hit post. A box should come up with a small puzzle. You just type in what it tells you to, agree to terms and conditions, and you're all set! We'd love it if you post on here. Thanks
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Post by exponation on Jun 28, 2013 5:35:59 GMT
(What if its a glitch? XD)
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Post by Diosma on Jun 28, 2013 5:42:46 GMT
What if what's a glitch? Nothing is a glitch.
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Post by A Guest on Jun 28, 2013 15:13:29 GMT
Hey! I love going to proboards and reading new rp forums sk I saw you had a guest page and wanted to critique a lil. :) Ill just give you some opinions and critiques on characters and then on the overall plot, kay? Kay
Exponation- You have very dark, thought out characters. Very nice! There's a lot of eerieness to them that I'm seeing, and it's really interesting me. The only critique I can give is that you need to show this darkness, since a lot of the stuff we've seen is only scratching the surface. Have Knore get a temper tantrum and do something stupid! Whatever you can think of would be great. Just reamember that a character can't be all darkness, nor entirely light. Now that Heidi's supposed to ignore that he's a lot more then a human, try and test that. See if you can push your character's boundaries, besides angstyness and trying to hurt themselves.
Diosma- Your characters are quirky and often an even mix of good and bad traits for very realistic terms. It's a shame you haven't gotten to show it! Your only problem is a lack of communication. Once you feel the need to have action, you start it- then realize no one else can do anything in the situation their characters are in, and so are forced to rp with yourself. In contrast to what i will tell Waffle, you might have too many characters! I would advise (if you even do, this is all a matter of suggestion) to get rid of your elf character. She's barely interacted with anyone, and the characters motives are to not be seen and to not interact with anyone. That'll end up with a whoooole lot of self-rping. It also helps to draw out your action more. Don't make it so short-lived, so that only you and maaaaybee one person for a brief time gets to enjoy it!
Waffle- Heidi's really cute. I find her to be an interesting character, but so far... she's sort of all-drama. This is a war rp right? I don't think Heidi has been in a single dangerous position. Get together with Exponation or Diosma and come up with some plans, jeaprodize your character a little! Some of her key flaws lie in fighting, so unveil those flaws! Secondly, you're the only person with one character. Its hard with multiple, I've tried, but so far youve only been able to rp with Exponation, not Diosma. Exponation doesn't have to be the bridge between you to, make another character and go crazy! You definitely can afford doing so.
Overall, there's a large bit of miscommunication. Like I said, its a war rp. Plan for some battles to happen! Get your characters caught up! Characters can become prisoners of war, or they could enlist after the death of a loved one, or get caught up in an unexpected skirmish, whatever! This rp is definitely lacking action though, so I'd suggest to start planning.
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